That’s inspiring man
You’ll be the hero of the next generation, they’ll study you. Your way will be the standard method, kids will train and eat like you. There will be a before and after Zen, you’ll change the game bro 
Lol, you know what, your competitors will admit that you’re the better man, they’ll be happy to get second place after you and shake your hand. Your family will be proud.
My visualization is really good. But you are on another level creating images on people’s mind through your writing.
And yet the flow is off.
Chronologically the second paragraph should be first. Or the last sentence of the first paragraph should go up and connect with the introduction.
Then the unfolding is rugged, try and read it, it’s bumpy. It drops and goes back up, the sentences should be balanced with each other.
It requires too much engagement.
Also too many words and not specific enough, I could’ve said more with less. The words should be more closely associated with the theme, without the readers having to “micro-think” to adjust. The concept could have been emphasized more to reinforce the picture before switching to the next motion. Like how much effort for how much unfolding. Low ROI
Every sentences feels off, as if the writer added more themes. Feels like a draft 
But hey, I go with the flow
The active engagement and deliberateness are what set the style apart. The curious readers have to do the active work, but the results last a while. The themes are dispersed but still coherent. The bits and pieces create a full vivid picture.
That’s another way to see it 
eto… Hello im charity 
sexted
I think I know why.
Why?
Read what you wrote again
Lol it’s a joke, wasn’t funny was it?
LMAO 
This is great 
Thought it was a fingerslip lol.
Still funny tho
I imagined the whole ordeal. Weird, weird mind-scape.
Try sending a video. He will answer that way 
and if your not too busy u can post it here 
You what?
Is that a typo or you really meant it?
Am I too old fashioned or what?
But i dont find that “supposedly” joke funny at all.
Are you guys ok at home?
It is weird GEN Z humour
I love it.
